Game is not getting downloaded

[rupesh1978]

Hi,
We are not getting download from windows store.
Can anyone tell me how to promote my game on windows store?

My game name is Farm Run 3D.
I am unable to post game link as i am a new at this forum.

Please suggest me if any thing i am lacking.

Thanks all

 

[WanderingTraveler]

Okay, could you post the screenshots you used as well as the game description? Also, did you release it on Windows Phone or regular 'ol Windows?\
I may be able to help you.

 

[rupesh1978]

I have released it for windows phone only.

Description is:
Are you getting bored of playing many of the farm games?
Here in "Farm Run 3D" you will get "Farm" game with all the new twist.
Play this action packed game and you will forget all the running games.
Your hero is running in the farm and enjoying the run.
The goal of the game is to get a run as you can without slamming into obstacles or finding your painful death in a terrible accident!
Watch out for what’s coming and respond quickly with your extra cool running skills

**Features**
***** Smooth control.
***** Amazing graphics
***** Easy to play yet addictive
***** Increasing difficulty
***** A very cool 3D game, with endless fun.
***** You can play this game to endless hours
***** Fun and action
***** Excellent HD graphics

How to play
Use accelerometer to move the player.
Swipe Up:- Swipe Up to Jump
Swipe Down:- Swipe Down to Slide
Get 100 Plus Coins to activate score multiplier.
Heart Power :- It will deactivate all the hurdles for some time.
Magnet Power :- It will collect all the coins on the way.
You can also share your best score with your friends with Facebook.
Run, jump, dash and slide over and around tons of different and tough obstacles in this best 3D running game!!
Get ready for the ultimate challenge and use your reflexes. Are you up for the challenge? Find out in this action-packed runner game!
Are you ready to start an amazing running journey and make your score a miracle?
Here you go...
DOWNLOAD NOW and experience the fun for yourself!
Enjoy Free Run for endless hours with Farm Run 3D.

 

[rupesh1978]

I have released it for windows phone only.

I am unable to post images and description right now because i am new here.

 

[WanderingTraveler]

Uh, saw the store description, and felt turned off immediately.

You might want to rewrite your description. For instance, you may as well just include the tutorial in the game itself rather than putting it in the app description. The features list could stand to be rewritten, as... you practically restated two features (addictive gameplay and excellent graphics) over and over again.

You can also stand to change the icon. And the screenshots. It's fairly obvious that the game is a port, and you managed to include references about tablets in a game made for Windows Phones only! The least you can do is implement this as a universal app.

Sorry if I was harsh, it's just that I'm sick of seeing ports as poorly handled as this.

My suggestions boil down to the following three:
-Replace the app tile and screenshots.
-Rewrite the description and advertise it for what it really is.
-Make it a universal Windows app.

Bonus: It appears quite deep in the results when you search for it. Windows Phone store search is actually quite poorly handled, at any rate.

 

[rupesh1978]

Thanks i will do it immediately.
I think all of your points are valid and needs to be re correct.

 

[WanderingTraveler]

Thanks i will do it immediately.
I think all of your points are valid and needs to be re correct.

And I'll be waiting for the day you get me to actually download the game

 

[rupesh1978]

Sure we will try to reach that level.

 

[rupesh1978]

we have uploaded our new game candy rush run.
Please have a look.