[Nisse Tuta]

Hello,
Ive made a short video of a friend who works as a piano tuner. Im currently working on an English subtitled version.
My English is ok in speech but writing isn't my strong side.
Is there an saviour with english as their native language here that could proof read my text and give me some pointers so that it sounds like two people talking and not something of google translate?
He or she will get a thanks in the credits unless there is like a million of you :)

[Nisse Tuta]

Its done, thanks to a friendly fellow named Miguell.
Here is the results,