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Surface has a Pen and drew flak or a meh from tech journalists
Apple got a Pencil and every tech journalist loses their minds
MS has long offered a Pen Loop for 4.99 for your Pen and gets called money grubbing greedy M$
Apple recently sells a Pencil case for 29.00 for your Pencil and tech sites call it stylish and glorious.
Blurb from both stores
Surface Pen Loop -
Keep your Surface Pen close at hand with the Surface Pen Loop. The loop is self-adhesive so you can stick it to your Surface Cover. Secure your Surface Pen with the Pen Loop and have easy access to quickly take notes or mark up a document. Simply stick the Pen Loop to the cover of your Surface and go.
Apple Pencil Case -
A beautifully crafted case for Apple Pencil made of durable leather, it’s available in colors that match other Apple accessories. It protects your Apple Pencil when you're not using it while making a graceful statement — cleanly and precisely designed, just like Apple Pencil.
Something is apparently wrong with the product blurb in the microsoft's store! It's too utilitarian! Apparently blurbs need to be, what do you call it, ah yes, "***-pirational", err I meant "aspirational". Sorry. Help Microsoft Fix the product description so that it can be an "aspirational" product just Apple's product and make it worthy of 4.99 or even 29.00 and wow tech journalists.
Let me go first. I'll substitute Surface pen loop in apple's blurb and see if I suddenly have an unstoppable urge to buy one.
Fixed blurb -
A beautifully crafted holder for the Surface Pen made of durable leather, it’s available in colors that match other Surface accessories. It secures your Surface Pen when you're not using it while making a graceful statement — cleanly and precisely designed, just like the Surface Pen.
How about you, help make an aspirational statement worthy of the lowly Surface Pen Holder like apple descripes its pencil case. Please make liberal use of exquisite, precision-designed, elegant, i.e.
Apple got a Pencil and every tech journalist loses their minds
MS has long offered a Pen Loop for 4.99 for your Pen and gets called money grubbing greedy M$
Apple recently sells a Pencil case for 29.00 for your Pencil and tech sites call it stylish and glorious.
Blurb from both stores
Surface Pen Loop -
Keep your Surface Pen close at hand with the Surface Pen Loop. The loop is self-adhesive so you can stick it to your Surface Cover. Secure your Surface Pen with the Pen Loop and have easy access to quickly take notes or mark up a document. Simply stick the Pen Loop to the cover of your Surface and go.
Apple Pencil Case -
A beautifully crafted case for Apple Pencil made of durable leather, it’s available in colors that match other Apple accessories. It protects your Apple Pencil when you're not using it while making a graceful statement — cleanly and precisely designed, just like Apple Pencil.
Something is apparently wrong with the product blurb in the microsoft's store! It's too utilitarian! Apparently blurbs need to be, what do you call it, ah yes, "***-pirational", err I meant "aspirational". Sorry. Help Microsoft Fix the product description so that it can be an "aspirational" product just Apple's product and make it worthy of 4.99 or even 29.00 and wow tech journalists.
Let me go first. I'll substitute Surface pen loop in apple's blurb and see if I suddenly have an unstoppable urge to buy one.
Fixed blurb -
A beautifully crafted holder for the Surface Pen made of durable leather, it’s available in colors that match other Surface accessories. It secures your Surface Pen when you're not using it while making a graceful statement — cleanly and precisely designed, just like the Surface Pen.
How about you, help make an aspirational statement worthy of the lowly Surface Pen Holder like apple descripes its pencil case. Please make liberal use of exquisite, precision-designed, elegant, i.e.